mmf

[abcdef]

maybe cause u are offeing escort services ?

[sophieofyork]

ok please don't take this the wrong way, but if I were looking for what you're offering the first thing that strikes me about your profile is the spelling. There are just a couple too many typo's.

otherwise it's just things like completing the interview, putting a bit more of 'you' into the profile.... make it more approachable and friendly....

Remember you are effectively trying to sell yourself. Take a step back from your profile and read it like an outsider- would you like that product??

If you can't be bothered however there are a fair few people now offering profile overhaul's for free where they just tidy it up and make your content work for you

[Andymatt1]

Spelling never my strong point lol many thanks constructive criticism always welcome I can defiantly see what your saying, we probably do the profiles on a phone rather than a computer, we will give it overhaul and new pics this week

Cheers for your help really apprechiated

[English Kate]

Damn I charged £250 last time I accepted a booking off 2 guys for an hour. I haven't looked at your pics yet, but it looks like I'm too late anyway, put me in reserve lol.

[Andymatt1]

Lol have a look at the pics and let us know defo

[abcdef]

Damn I charged £250 last time I accepted a booking off 2 guys for an hour. I haven't looked at your pics yet, but it looks like I'm too late anyway, put me in reserve lol.

i had volunteered u lol

[English Kate]

Guys, if we meet, please, please, please let me take some pics for you. I have a feeling that they aren't doing you justice. Send me a message if you would like my honest opinion on what you could do to improve what you have now, while you're waiting for the Kate make over lol

Are you anywhere near Brighton is is my Geography way off line again?

Ps. When I used to go on fab a lot, I used to often help guys with their profiles and they all got results from them.

[MrSmith767]

Are you anywhere near Brighton is is my Geography way off line again?

Your geography is way off again lol

[abcdef]

Are you anywhere near Brighton is is my Geography way off line again?

Your geography is way off again lol

scatty

[English Kate]

lol I know and (for what it is worth) I am knackered. Crappy mattress the first night and working till late last night. I have no sense of direction lol. Thank God for satnavs!