20-03-2013, 00:14
(19-03-2013, 15:54)x Connie x Wrote: my apologies for the above comment about your grammar - i'm having a slow day, so i've scrolled down and read the rest which looks perfect.
unfortunately, the gents tend to just read the first few lines so maybe give them a quick rewrite. e.g.,
"ONLY ACCEPT TWO BOOKINGS ONE DAY" change to I ONLY ACCEPT TWO BOOKINGS PER DAY
"if you are looking for special girl different from the rest, i am looking forward to hear from you" change to, if you are looking for a special girl who's different from the rest then i'm looking forward to hearing from you. etc
hope this helps and don't take offence at my earlier reply - didn't realise you'd been here a while x
thanks very much for your helpful reply, i have took your suggestion and changed my profile...english is not my first language so i always making mistake..haa..